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Threes Trouble

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Worked on this drawing for a few days. It's pretty big at 19x24, so it took some time. I think it turned out pretty good, I usually hate my stuff but this one I am ok with.

I used pen, copic warm, cool, and neutral greys, white ink pens, and a little white colored pencil.

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. Bad or good I want to hear it all. Can't get better with out your input. Thanks!
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is really good. I love the color scheme and the anatomy is superb but...it just seems a bit tense. The most obvious example of this is the girl on the far left [chick with the semi curly hair]. He body is nice and proportionate but that arm...is she grabbing the other girl's boob or is it just there to show they are really close?

I can't say anything on the guns since I am no gun expert but at least the viewer can look at it and see that it is indeed a gun.

The sculpting of the face is good but they all look too similar, almost like it is the same girl in different poses/hairstyle. Try to make a little thing different with each of them like a beauty mark or something.

In all I really like the picture but there are little flaws. But that just makes it all the more endearing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>